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4 years ago @ tinywords - 20 years of tinywords! · 0 replies · +1 points

Congratulations! So few literary magazines ever make it to 20. Best wishes for the next 20.

6 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2018/12/... · 0 replies · +2 points

sleep-deprived
due to nightmares about zombies
stumbling through my day

(a true story, albeit not in the same league as your haiku)

6 years ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +1 points

Brilliant.

6 years ago @ tinywords - four haiku · 0 replies · +1 points

Yeah, my parents said "PJs" as well.

6 years ago @ tinywords - four haiku · 1 reply · +2 points

Thanks for the comments and haiku. I'm not entirely sure why I went with the British spelling of "pyjamas" and yet chose the American word "laundromat" (instead of laundrette), but I did think about it, and it just came down to those were the words I preferred in each case. Give me time and I'll probably be saying "washing" rather than "laundry", too!

6 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2018/11/... · 0 replies · +1 points

Perfect.

6 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2018/10/... · 0 replies · +1 points

drunken kung fu
the falling leaf veers and twists

12 years ago @ tinywords - New ice · 0 replies · +2 points

(Hope it doesn't seem too conceited to respond to my own photo! I've been having such fun reading all the other poems, I couldn't resist. Even though I have a photohaiku blog, I pretty much suck at haiku, so I didn't even attempt it here.)

12 years ago @ tinywords - New ice · 1 reply · +5 points

winter road

the asphalt
fades to white
from all the salt

ice stitches
jack-knifed feathers
in the ditch

phragmites rocks
in the wind
from passing trucks

13 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2011/07/... · 0 replies · +3 points

Back from the hike, boots caked with pollen

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