poppyflowersnyc
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15 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - EXCLUSIVE: LiLo IS TRY... · 6 replies · +8 points
15 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - EXCLUSIVE: LiLo IS TRY... · 7 replies · +8 points
16 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - SPE------IDI : HEIDI... · 1 reply · +1 points
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16 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - SPE------IDI : HEIDI... · 7 replies · +1 points
You're = a contraction of you are.
"yahoo's OMG site has already covered this....your LATE!!!!"
16 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - SPE------IDI : HEIDI... · 8 replies · +1 points
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16 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - DOUG REINHARDT aka "BU... · 0 replies · +12 points
I seen you've taken my advice about not ending every sentence with an exclamation point. I'm not a fan of yours but neither have I ever left mean spirited comments. But all I want to know is: WHAT THE F*CK DID YOU JUST WRITE IN THE ABOVE POST!?
If you call yourself a blogger and unable to form coherent sentences -- it looks EXTREMELY unprofessional. After reading the essay above it has lead to believe that you truly do need help. Nothing of what was posted above makes any sense whatsoever. If you want to be taken seriously as a writer you must do the following:
A) Hire editors (Let's not kid ourselves, you need a whole team of those)
B) Study other bloggers (Read the New York Times, TMZ, and etc. Study how they write and try and take from what you see to your own writing)
C) Buy a dictionary
D) Buy a grammar book (Very important)
E) Stay away from writing anything if you're high (It's EXTREMELY unprofessional)
I know you read these comments. I hope you take them seriously.
Sincerely,
Poppy
16 years ago @ MissTilaOMG! - DOUG REINHARDT aka "BU... · 1 reply · +3 points