IntenseDebate - Christopher Pickslay

22 weeks ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2011/12/... · 0 replies · +1 points

first frost--
taking my daughter
down a well-traveled road

38 weeks ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2011/08/... · 0 replies · +1 points

Man, I love this one, John. So many ways to visualize it, all of them places I'd rather be right now.

38 weeks ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2011/08/... · 0 replies · +3 points

the shopkeeper beams
as tango crackles
from her gramophone

39 weeks ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2011/08/... · 0 replies · +3 points

concentric circles
we hunt for frogs
among the reeds

40 weeks ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +1 points

hushed voices
metal on metal
my daughter's first cry

41 weeks ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2011/08/... · 0 replies · +1 points

I love the way this works with the photo. Nice job, Melinda!

41 weeks ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +1 points

blistering
the cold sting
from the garden hose

42 weeks ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +4 points

I love how "perched" is perched right up there on top of your poem. Nice image!

43 weeks ago @ tinywords - a few for you to consi... · 0 replies · +4 points

in the keys of the piano he loses himself

44 weeks ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 1 reply · +1 points

Wow, really nice Kathe. I just had this experience with my son last week, and your haiku brought it back vividly.

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