Thanks for the input guys, I had a rough week and was basically just spitting out whatever came to mind. I have no plan of ever turning this one in, so thanks for being honest with how it just didn't flow. I totally agree. I had a really hard time writing about this because I don't sympathize with anything that Rich said in her writing. It's a hard topic for me to be totally neutral about, and I was afraid of diving too far off the deep end with my opinions on feminism; once I got the intro done, I had no clue how to tie it in with a summary of all 3 poems.
Worst paper I've ever written, so thanks for not being too harsh. If I would have gotten these comments earlier in the week, I would've been able to revise it signifigantly, but I suppose it's kind of a lost cause at this point.
Look forward to better revisions in the future, and better writing too! Sorry about this one! :/