danielbier8

danielbier8

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14 years ago @ News From Antiwar.com - Obama: Iran Can't... · 0 replies · +1 points

Good article, but you might want a sharp editor.
-Paragraph 1: *from "...an even harsher line *frrom the administration."
-Paragraph 3: *as "...gone so far as to condemn the idea *is contrary to the nation’s very nature as an Islamic Republic."
-Paragraph 3: *serious "...they have provided no *series evidence to support their case." "...rhetorical value than as *series indications..."
-Paragraph 4: *and "...*ande may even indicate..."
There's a couple grammatical errors too, but it's technical.
I'd be happy to proof for you.