I LOVE this story and the picture. The scene at the end with the narrator hiding by the plant and the sound of the zippers is especially vivid and hilarious. And you were fantastic when you read it at Chi Chi's Word Parlor! Is it OK if I put a plug for the Chi Chi's Word Parlor class so everyone can write a piece as cool as yours? The class this weekend is full, but I've opened up another section on January 10, 4:30-7. http://www.writingpad.com/ClassSchedule.htm#perfo...
Marilyn