IntenseDebate - Flossie Benton Rogers

Oh wow, she's caught! What will happen next??!

Ooh, I really like the idea of a wolf / doctor. I hope she gets help. Intriguing!

This makes me want to know more. I like your description, the interactions among them, and the feeling of the piece.

Emotions nicely conveyed. I feel her sadness and hope they can work things out so they don't have to split. It makes we want to know more about them.

Sensual scene. I like that she's in control. Well done.

13 years ago @ http://naughtypagesofp... - Hump Day Hook · 0 replies · +1 points

Awww. Poor guy. Great hook. I really want to see how he deals with this next.

I really like the way the two relate to each other. You have shown some deep conversation. Well done!

Intriguing! I can tell I'll like this one.

I like Norelia!

Most intriguing, Phoenix!

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