When conversing with someone you're automatically filling your responses into easy-to-read para's and working on the punchy headings when you realise the conversation has stopped. You mentally press the publish button.
Your companion is staring at you. You do not receive a pingback.

Thank you jason.
I love drop in lines like "Back before this all started" Really drops you straight into the meat of the timeline.
Also love the dialogue "Fuck, oh, you Fuck" which is real, authentic and appropriate.
Great pacing in the paras.

Overall. Thumbs up! (Is that an appropriate marking scale for a zombie story? IDK!)