I do not wish to sound like I am complaining, but why is the grammar on this article poor in places?

Other than that, thank you so, so much, I'm looking forward especially to "The Young Victoria," since "C.R.A.Z.Y." was so amazing. With the movie "Daybreak," does anyone know if the vampire farms is an original idea? I seem to recognise it, but I could well be thinking of The Matrix.